The Briefcase
The Walrus|July/August 2024
What I learned about being a writer from trying to finish a dead man's book
- RICHARD KELLY KEMICK
The Briefcase

THERE ARE NUMEROUS DRAFTS. Some parts are written in pencil, some in pen, some on a typewriter, and some on a computer. Several pages were printed on old-timey paper attached to each other along a perforated edge, unfurling like a scroll, and some were saved on a 3.5-inch floppy that can now be retrieved only as a file of randomized numbers, like code in the Matrix.

The progression of technology seems to imply a hierarchy of edits-that the pencil draft is superseded by the pen draft, the typewritten pages supersede the longhand ones, and the perforated paper supersedes them all. However, scenes rarely appear in more than one edition, meaning that each ensuing draft was more addition than revision.

Everything is unstapled; pagination happens randomly and redundantly. "Page one" repeats like déjà vu. There are notebooks labelled "The Fortress Before Armageddon" or "Origins Pt II: Plus Messiah's Speeches" or "THE WAR" (emphasis in original), but it is impossible to discern sequence. There's a typewritten stack, bound by a paper clip, that is titled "CHAPTER" but without any ensuing number; and beside it, in demonstrative red ink, is written "DONE." There's a folder labelled "OUTLINE." It is empty.

There is orphaned loose leaf; there are algebraic formulas; there are hand-drawn character sketches. The point of view veers between third and first. Sometimes it takes the form of a memoir; sometimes it's epistolary; sometimes there is what one would call poetry.

The narrative itself takes place across several books, over multiple generations, on several astral planes. There is a timeline of reality, which begins as a straight shot but then pivots into cubes that stack upon themselves. One scene is dated 1982, another is dated 2500 AD, and another features a knight with a sword.

この蚘事は The Walrus の July/August 2024 版に掲茉されおいたす。

7 日間の Magzter GOLD 無料トラむアルを開始しお、䜕千もの厳遞されたプレミアム ストヌリヌ、9,000 以䞊の雑誌や新聞にアクセスしおください。

この蚘事は The Walrus の July/August 2024 版に掲茉されおいたす。

7 日間の Magzter GOLD 無料トラむアルを開始しお、䜕千もの厳遞されたプレミアム ストヌリヌ、9,000 以䞊の雑誌や新聞にアクセスしおください。

THE WALRUSのその他の蚘事すべお衚瀺
Mark Her Words
The Walrus

Mark Her Words

Forget polite verse Mary Dalton wants you to feel the salt and soil of Newfoundland

time-read
6 分  |
January/February 2025
All for Show
The Walrus

All for Show

Jani Lauzon has maintained she is Métis and her play 1939—now touring Canada—is based on her father’s experience at a residential school. What if none of it is true?

time-read
10+ 分  |
January/February 2025
My GUILTY PLEASURE
The Walrus

My GUILTY PLEASURE

REVISIONS TO this essay have been on my to-do list for weeks.

time-read
3 分  |
January/February 2025
LEGAL CHALLENGE
The Walrus

LEGAL CHALLENGE

Racialized professors say they were underpaid, bullied, and ignored at one of Canada’s top law schools

time-read
10+ 分  |
January/February 2025
Circuit Breakers
The Walrus

Circuit Breakers

Inside the Canadian company betting millions on human-like robots

time-read
10+ 分  |
January/February 2025
Pack Ice Season
The Walrus

Pack Ice Season

THE ICEBERG slid in on a Sunday morning when the water was as flat as a fresh sheet of tin foil.

time-read
10+ 分  |
January/February 2025
Inside Second Harvest’s Fight Against Food Waste
The Walrus

Inside Second Harvest’s Fight Against Food Waste

How this ambitious non-profit juggles food rescue, research, education, and advocacy to reduce food waste, combat climate change and feed hungry Canadians.

time-read
4 分  |
January/February 2025
Should the Arctic Really Brace for an Invasion?
The Walrus

Should the Arctic Really Brace for an Invasion?

The people who live there would rather see more housing and maybe some dentists

time-read
7 分  |
January/February 2025
Sticker Shock
The Walrus

Sticker Shock

From $8 coffees to $20 sandwiches, consumer rage is real—and it's shaping the next election

time-read
6 分  |
January/February 2025
A Baby? In This Economy?
The Walrus

A Baby? In This Economy?

The cost of parenting keeps going up

time-read
10+ 分  |
January/February 2025